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标题: 隱括習作 [打印本页]

作者: cici    时间: 2009-11-13 23:05     标题: 隱括習作

默默獨幽居,行行將歲莫。
擁爐何所思,寐坐拂書冊。
青渥侵成灰,華年不可逆。
清揚復善懷,顧盼流深碧。
傾國稱容光,相游雜玉石。
美人有本心,游士不能跡。
我獨愛其真,純如懷璞璧。
憂難為琢磨,憔悴生顏色。
促膝重呢喃,此情安所適。
山陵一望中,又作參商隔。

《When You Are Old》
  
When you are old and gray and full of sleep
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true;
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face.
And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead,
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.

沒有預期的好,想起來啥了再改。

[ 本帖最后由 cici 于 2009-11-14 11:20 编辑 ]
作者: 张建昭    时间: 2009-11-15 18:46

已经很好了。
作者: 真幽默    时间: 2009-11-15 19:10

还是双声道的,能不好吗




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